Thread: Critique ofResume
12-12-2003, 03:24 PM #1
- Join Date
- Apr 2003
Please take a look at the following resume and let me know what you think. Any criticism is greatly appreciated. Thank you.
Nicholas Walter Hickman
2232 N.W. 52 St.
Oklahoma City, Oklahoma 73112
Phone: (405) 286-2081
To obtain a sworn position as an Edmond fire fighter that will afford me the opportunity to serve the community.
Graduated May 2002: Oklahoma State University Stillwater, OK
Bachelor of Science, Business Administration Majors (3): International Business, Marketing, Spanish
Major GPA: 3.5/4.0
Awards/Scholarships: Tuition Waiver Scholarship, Deanís Honor Roll,
Deanís List of Distinguished Students
Emergency Medical Technician-Basic Meridian Technology Center Stillwater, OK
2003-Present Public Health Educator Oklahoma State Department of Health
*Teach CPR/First Aid Classes to individuals/groups in the community.
*Educate youth about injury prevention through Risk Watch.
*Write press releases regarding a variety of health issues and concerns.
*Represent Health Department at community meetings and events.
*Attend continuing education trainings throughout Oklahoma.
*Coordinate BT preparedness in Logan County.
*Research and write grants for communities.
2000-2003 Foreman Patio Club Apartments Stillwater, OK
*Managed general work crew.
*Reported to management the daily activities of employees.
*Maintained and repair tenantsí residences.
*Trained new employees on company procedures.
*On call to aide in emergencies during off hours.
2000-2001 President Sigma Phi Epsilon Fraternity Stillwater, OK
*Presided over fraternity consisting of 100+ members.
*Recruited new members to join fraternity.
*Developed annual budget.
*Delegated responsibility among executive members.
*Represented fraternity at weekly Inter-Fraternity Council Meetings.
*Communicated weekly with alumni board and university officials.
*Implemented new policies for fraternity.
*Assembled members to actively participate in fraternity duties.
*Enforced bylaws and expectations.
*Trained next president.
Friends of the Library, Habitat for Humanity, Juke Joint Jog, The Big Event, Race for the Cure
12-16-2003, 06:36 PM #2
- Join Date
- Aug 2002
- San Francisco Bay Area
Check out the Resume posting a few below this one for a sample format.
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